Mark: 34/48 Grade: B
1) Lose the last line of your intro and outline the 2 theoretical perspectives.
2) Always try to reference quotes
3) You need to mention Citizen Journalism more
4) Excellent Conclusion, but include Marxism and pluralism
5) Develop points on twitter more, provide more examples.
Personally, I believe I need to use a few more quotes and analyse Citizen journalism more, along with examples. I also need to improve my twitter example. i have made the improvements on to my essay
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